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The crisp morning air brought a great start to a new day. That is, for every one else. As I lay here, remembering the memories of my childhood and adulthood, a single tear rolls down my cheek. I remember everything from the beginning. The bear, my mother, the boy who saved me. .
. All these memories creep into my mind one by one as my breath grows heavier and my heart beats faster and faster like a drum. This was more peaceful than I had ever imagined. Accepting that it was my time, my eyes started to close slowly and glaze, my heart's never ending routine of beats went from fast to a ever so tiny tremble, and  the memories flooded into my mind like a river. Through the water's journey, it went along the rocks, which controlled how the water rose,
turned white, and splashed against the shore. It stood in the water's way, and yet, the water always managed to rip through. In the end, the water made it to a serene lake, where it rested peacefully from it's journey. That is when it will float to the heavens and fall again, starting it's journey over. Now, I have arrived at my lake, and slowly, ever so slowly, evaporate, waiting to fall again in a new life, and start over. . .
     
©2009 ~Firebonbon
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Author's Comments

This is the story I am writing. I am glad It is on the internet and I couldn't have done this without my friends. They helped develope the story with me. There are three books. I am a young author, and I am quite proud of this beginning :)
Please send a request if you like, and I am still learning how to draw well, so I am requesting someone to do some artwork for the book. Only people good at wolves and people and snakes.

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:iconfirebonbon:
Yay! Finally I have posted this! The blood sweat in tears i put in this! lol!

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Firebonbon
:iconpuyocat:
Lol blood?
It's very good.

One thing...

This paragraph -- The crisp morning air brought a great start to a new day. That is, for every one else. As I lay here, remembering the memories of my childhood and adulthood, a single tear rolls down my cheek. I remember everything from the beginning. The bear, my mother, the boy who saved me.

It's sounds a bit choppy. I can do a bit of editing if you want.

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<3 Love you all.
:iconfirebonbon:
sure, np. edit any mistakes if you like

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Firebonbon
:iconkonkiller:
this is pretty good!

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*maggots 4 life*

"I used to be a basket case, but the handle broke and I fell out and landed on my head."

Row, row, row, your boat, gently down the stream, throw the n00bs off the boat and smile as they scream. :]
:iconfirebonbon:
Hey, thanks! :D

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Firebonbon
:iconkonkiller:
sure thing! btw its halden....

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*maggots 4 life*

"I used to be a basket case, but the handle broke and I fell out and landed on my head."

Row, row, row, your boat, gently down the stream, throw the n00bs off the boat and smile as they scream. :]
:iconfirebonbon:
oh ok. lol

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Firebonbon

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